What is your question? This statement is usually in response to a specific question someone has asked, such as "Why do you want to attend our school?" or "What makes you qualified for this career path?" Always keep in mind your reader, so that you can appeal to them specifically. A statement showing how qualifications match the organization stands out!
1. First paragraph
My experience as a tutor at Stephen F. Austin State University's (SFASU) Academic Assistance Resources Center (AARC) has made me an excellent choice for a teaching internship with the Houston Independent School District.
2. Second paragraph
I worked as a tutor at SFASU's AARC, tutoring writing because I was an English major and good at academic papers. I wanted to help other students learn how to write their own papers until they no longer needed my help. One time...
3. Third paragraph
Experiences such as tutoring at SFASU as well as my summer camp counseling will enable me to contribute to the Houston Independent School District as well as learn from this internship.